15 thoughts on “Where Ghosts Walk (By ellie248)”

  1. Oh my God!!!!!
    I was so sad!!!!!!
    You did a great story my friend and I could not stop reading with horror!!!!! I could not imagine an old Little Joe without his beloved family!!
    Now I am relieved!!!! Grand finale!!!
    I hope to read more from yours!!!!

  2. Great job! Recognized the storyline idea near the beginning but kept reading to see how you would fit it to the Cartwrights which you did wonderfully! Very nicely written and thoroughly entertaining!

  3. Be careful for what you wish. Ellie, you had me on the edge of my seat. I couldn’t imagine how or why things had changed so much. I agree with Miss Kitty. It does show Joe need for his family, even grumpy ole Adam.

    1. Glad you liked it. I tried very hard to make it mysterious. It kind-of makes me shudder though – what if things HAD ended that badly?

    1. Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I actually wrote it a few years ago, and when I re-read it before posting I could hardly believe I’d written it. It was better than I remembered it being.

  4. That was really good and a deep look into Joe’s need for his family! Welcome to Bonanza Brand’s group of writers! You are certainly a wonderful addition and I can’t wait to see more from you!

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