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A Journey Against Time (by Puppycuddles)

January 25, 2016 | 6 Comments


Summary: While trying to foil a land grab scheme, Joe is wounded. Despite her own injuries, can his younger sister, Sierra, get him to a doctor in time? A sister fic, with a plot based loosely around the episodes of Land Grab and My Brothers Keeper.

Word count: 13,354 words  Rating: T


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  1. Wow! That was a great story, PC! I really wasn’t sure if giving the Cartwright brothers a little sister would work, but it turned out wonderfully! The relationship between the brothers and Sierra is amazing. Brava! I can’t wait to read any other story you might have in the works. 😉

    • Thanks so much for your kind words! I’m glad to hear you enjoyed this and gave it a chance despite your doubts at the beginning. Unfortunately, there’s not too many ‘little sister’ stories, in my opinion at least, written so she fits with the rest of the family. That was one of my main goals when I decided to create Sierra and I’m thrilled to have accomplished that! More stories are definitely ‘in the works’so keep on the lookout! 😉

  2. That was quite a roller coaster story. It had me on the edge many times. You described the siblings well and how they react to each other. Sierra is quite a gal and definitely a Cartwright. She persevered through it all to save Joe.

    • Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts about the story with me! I’m thrilled to hear that you enjoyed it! And yes, Sierra definitely inherited the Cartwright stubbornness and determination!

  3. I can’t even tell you how perfectly you conveyed each sibling’s personality and I LOVE Sierra! Please, please, please write more, you have an amazing gift! The story kept me entranced throughout but the ending scene was so tender, it made me cry. Then I had to listen to the song and when I closed my eyes and listened, it felt like I was in Sierra’s room. I could see and hear it all so clearly. Thank you for a wonderful story and welcome to BB’s library, Girl, can’t wait to see more from you!!

    • Thank you so much for your sweet comments! You made my day! I’m so glad you liked the story! The ending scene was one of my favorite parts to write. And yes ma’am, I do plan to write more stories featuring Sierra and the boys. I have currently have one other story written that I am doing final revisions to and plenty more ideas ‘jumping around in my head.’

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