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8 people are talking about “Ben’s Boy Adam (by DJK)

  1. These were wonderful. I giggled at the thought of a young Adam getting busted kissing his girl, but the last one was perfect.

  2. Loved the vignettes and the way you left the endings open so that the imagination could soar. Wonderful way you have of getting in Adam’s mind and letting us in there too. The contrast of his thoughts with his words was fascinating.

  3. These showed some different sides of Adam, but very natural ones too. He’s a master of sidestepping the issue but became too good at building fences. Ben knows his eldest very well.

    • Thank you for letting me know that you felt these stories rang true for the character. I appreciate it so much! DJK :>)

  4. Loved the looks into moments of Adam’s life, and how Ben knows… “Twenty-six years of being your father.”

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