12 thoughts on “Ben’s Boy Adam (by DJK)”

  1. great seeing Adam at two ages. had to smile when he got caught kissing his girl, some thing any red blooded male would do. You got his character just right, and Ben certainly knows his boys

  2. These were wonderful. I giggled at the thought of a young Adam getting busted kissing his girl, but the last one was perfect.

    1. I’m glad I could bring a little laugh to your life. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed these little bits! DJK :>)

  3. Loved the vignettes and the way you left the endings open so that the imagination could soar. Wonderful way you have of getting in Adam’s mind and letting us in there too. The contrast of his thoughts with his words was fascinating.

    1. Thank you so much for the lovely review. I’m so thrilled that you feel that Adam’s thoughts were true to character. DJK :>)

  4. These showed some different sides of Adam, but very natural ones too. He’s a master of sidestepping the issue but became too good at building fences. Ben knows his eldest very well.

    1. Thank you for letting me know that you felt these stories rang true for the character. I appreciate it so much! DJK :>)

  5. Loved the looks into moments of Adam’s life, and how Ben knows… “Twenty-six years of being your father.”

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