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Fist City (by BluewindFarm)

May 18, 2017 | 27 Comments

Summary:  Gossips sour Ben’s mood when he returns from a business trip; and he only wants to hear an explanation direct from the guilty party.

Rating:  T  (1,455 words)

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  1. This was fun! I’m an old-time fan of Loretta Lynn, and “Fist City” was stamped all over this story–and yet I was still surprised when the defiant figure turned over to reveal the troublemaker! I really got a kick out of this one, BWF!

    • sandspur, she was the coal miner’s daughter and her songs, though simple, had power to convey a lot. Glad you enjoyed the read. Thank you for letting me know.

  2. Cute story that was charming in its entirety and I too was floored by “who” was the culprit! Thanks for this!

    • MK4A – I hope the floor didn’t hurt you when you landed. Thank you for reading and for taking a moment to leave a comment.

    • QF – Glad you saw the humor in Ben’s final request. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment. 🙂

  3. Like most of the others who’ve posted, I was caught up in who Ben heading up to have it out with. I had to read what he pushed away a few times before I got it! Fun story with a great surprise.

  4. Inspiration comes from so many sources. Glad your muse was tickled for this one, BWF. What a fun story with a couple of great surprises.

    • AC – It is amazing when inspiration will strike and what comes as a result. Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment.

    • Jojay, Yes, Ben should always keep to positive thinking. Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment.

  5. I know the song — “You better move your feet if you don’t wanna eat a meal that’s called Fist City!” Cute story, BWF. I wasn’t expecting the object of Ben’s ire to be…well you know. 🙂

    • ML – glad you enjoyed yourself. I just had to write this after hearing the song for the first time in years. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.

  6. BWF, I just love a good love story! Great plot surprise (who is behind door #3?) and great descriptive passages. Bravo!

    • HA – Hope this means you enjoyed the surprise! Thank you for reading and taking a moment to leave a comment.

      • Yes, I had assumed the naughty one that caused all the trouble, and Pa was on his way in to let him have it!

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